Well, i like your type setting other then the upside down backwards LOVE. Try setting the same way but dont make it backwards as well, i had some trouble reading it. Other then that, its good, i like the colors too.
That LOVE kinda remind me Masakazu Katsura's Zetman , there's a pub in that manga call LOVE...and it's upside down, here's the link ...http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_PWkkcT7ZJ-A/STHtb-E-jXI/AAAAAAAAAGc/6vLBVlwBotg/s1600-h/dm.kaicn.com__61958_98_P2F.jpg the background color hierarchies are good...maybe you can make the golf shoe's color look neater...those mottles on the kinda bother me a little bit...if it's relating your story...just ignore my words
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i really like your informational type ^^
Well, i like your type setting other then the upside down backwards LOVE. Try setting the same way but dont make it backwards as well, i had some trouble reading it. Other then that, its good, i like the colors too.
That LOVE kinda remind me Masakazu Katsura's Zetman , there's a pub in that manga call LOVE...and it's upside down,
here's the link
...http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_PWkkcT7ZJ-A/STHtb-E-jXI/AAAAAAAAAGc/6vLBVlwBotg/s1600-h/dm.kaicn.com__61958_98_P2F.jpg
the background color hierarchies are good...maybe you can make the golf shoe's color look neater...those mottles on the kinda bother me a little bit...if it's relating your story...just ignore my words
oh...and i think we need to use en dash between the date, right?
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